hey great job on the NATA head turn collab of animations
I did some calculations to verify your math.
0 = 5
0/0 = 5/0
(0/0)^(-1) = (5/0)^(-1)
it checks out.
magical. probably your sharpest writing yet.
Emrox, I hate to say it, but I'm just going to give it to you straight and say that this was a huge disappointment for me. You'd been working so hard and going so strong throughout this whole contest, and now being in the finals, you finish up with this.
I really just don't know what to say. This doesn't adhere to the theme in the slightest. In fact, there isn't even a cohesive story to be found. All I got from this was a young boy named John trying to get my contact information, and frankly that makes me uncomfortable. Also, did you plug a project of yours in the middle of your entry? Isn't that against the rules? I'm pretty sure that's against the rules. The animation was pedestrian at best, as a matter of fact the character's mouth appeared to be the only moving part in the entire animation.
The sound quality was quite bad, I noticed a lot of popping, and you could hear the voice echoing off the walls, which effectively broke the immersion that the outdoor scenery built up.
I don't know if you were short on time, depressed, or what, but I know you can do way better than this. You still have a couple days left before this round ends, I really think you should build on what you have here. It's not over until it's over and I know if you put the effort in you'll come up with something.
I gave you half of a star for the main character's hair.
I'm losing sleep over that fuckin hair man
this was terrible. i hated it and you're a poo
that was really intense. I was on the edge of my seat, nothing good ever comes from triangle teeth grins.
EDD LIVES OWNN!
Very well animated, colorful, evocative and emotional. I'm also very impressed that you'd go to the trouble of making clay models of the characters, where a less ambitious person would just use simpler camera angles. Radical journey and worth all 5 of these stars.
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